My Unlucky Day
Creative Writing Tagged , ants, Coco Pops, unlucky, worst day ever April 17th, 2008From the moment I got up, looked into yesterday’s bowl of Coco Pops and found ants forming the word UNLUCKY, I knew that today was not going to be a good day. The hot water was not working and i had a cold shower. all my undies were grubby and I missed the bus.
How much worse can this day get? I thought gloomily as I trudged the muddy route to school via an old cow paddock littered with thistles. I was sure I had it as bad as it comes until ‘Ouch!’ I hadn’t been looking where I was going and had trodden on a particularly large thistle. The spikes made tiny holes in my uniform and lodged their tips in my skin. One had even found its way into my shoe, getting stuck between my big toe and second. Great, I thought miserably, now I have to pull them all out.
I sat down on a thistle-free patch of grass and started dislodging thistles. Each one felt like a tiny needle determined to bury itself in my flesh and wouldn’t come 1out. I winced as I pulled an enormous thistle spike out of my knee, then another one. The one in my foot hurt a lot. I only just managed to pull them all out, but I had temporarily forgotten my other problems.
I checked my watch. “8:50!” I yelp. “I’ll be late!” I started sprinting to school, not caring about how muddy I got, though I was cautiously avoiding thistles. But even though I ran as fast as I could, it was still 9:15 when I slowed to a walk outside the school gates.
I peered up at the sign as I usually do. ‘Liliac Primary School,’ the sign read, then underneath, ‘The Only and Therefore the Best,’ was the motto engraved in the granite arch looming above me and casting a shadow over the school, making a giant sad face. The buildings were worse, painted lavender purple in a disgusting attempt to make the place more welcome and friendly. They looked like giant purple toes to me, but I walked inside my grade’s building anyway. Now, I thought, which room is my class in? Do we have Music or Maths? I prayed silently for Music as I listened for the sound of students talking.
By the time I got home, I was exhausted and convinced that I had a curse hanging over me. I don’t even want to think about what happened at school, how much trouble I got into for being late and muddy, and that it was Math Test Day.
It was the worst day of my life, I thought as I slipped into bed a few hours later, but I was partly relieved. At least tomorrow can’t get any worse!
The next morning I woke up, feeling rather happy. When I got into the kitchen I found not my old Coco Pops, but a new Cornflake box, complete with honey and milk. And no ants in there either, just a spoon. I wolfed down the breakfast, grinning, and then returned to my room, elated. In my undies drawer were stacks of clean undies, ready for wearing. I was on the bus early, but when I sat down all the students and driver were staring at me. Why was that? When the bus arrived at school, I stepped off and suddenly felt cold. Then I realised why they were all staring at me and muttering. Oh no! I realise with a horrified jolt or shock running through me. I’ve left my clothes at home!
THE END By Tzigane
April 26th, 2008 at 5:05 am
Hello there
My name is Mrs McGhie and I teach 9 & 10 year olds in Auckland, New Zealand. We’re on school holidays right now, but when school starts again in a weeks time I’m going to share your class blog with my class. I’ve just finished reading all the stories on your blog and I think they’re fantastic! I really like the way “My Unlucky Day” was written. It made me laugh out loud and I just had to keep reading to see what happened next. The writing was so descriptive that I was able to create a picture of what was happening in my mind. I’m looking forward to visiting your blog again and sharing your work with my class. Keep up the hard work.
From Mrs McGhie
April 28th, 2008 at 11:59 pm
I think we’ve nearly all had a day like this at one point or another……whether we eat CocoPops or not. I love to read your creative writing, and this is a great method for me to keep up wiht what you are creating. Well done………..